I made notes on Petes notes. His notes were useful and gave me a lot of help. I found the essay writing and researching process took me a lot longer than I thought it would. However, when I got into the swing of it it began to make more sense. At this stage, Pete said I had a substantial good draft that I just needed to keep going at. The main thing at this stage that I was told to focus on was the intro.
I was asked what is impacting the change in responsibility. From my research, I gathered that it was to do with the awareness that has come about through the media. This is quite an important part that needs to be included.
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